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Re: Sinerity
thanks for the review and yeah my 45 second revising and editing didnt catch all the mistakes but im not gonna change it. thats my final work rather its crap ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Sinerity
Hands shaking Lips slightly quivering We talked. But this wasn't just a talk No. This wasn't a lets try to fix this talk. This was a 'Can we talk?' talk. ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Dawn Reports.....some number
Hell its been a while since Ive last posted something much less visit this site. Most likely the people who had read my previous 'reports' have left or no longer ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Modern Times (Pre-read)
As I'm sure you know times are changing rapidly. Wars all over the world, political unrest, mass protest, riots, etc. This is nothing new and is receiving a lot of ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Creation Without Explanations
The following is completely opinionated and may or may not run parallel with your thoughts, regardless read with an open mind. What motivates you to write, create, and/or re-create? What ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: The Aftermath: Shawn's Journal Entries 1-3
August 3, 2023 11:57 p.m. My body betrays me as it continues to inflict pain on me until I feed myself. I'm so damn hungry. Where are the hunters dammit?! ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Captured Spirit Light
I not a photojournalist, but I play one T.V. and I have to say this is quite the imagine of conversion. lol. But honestly it looks pretty cool you have ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Pointless Ranting
So sad to see that today true art, music, literature, and culture is not appreciated as it once had been. Though it only a matter of a opinion I feel ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: A Man Not Alone
There sat a man not ten feet in font me. His hair was snow white and skin so deathly pale. In his lap he held a book with both hands ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Reports: Power (1)
Hey Dawn Report fans (all three of you) this is going to be 1 of 3 reports regarding 'power' as a stand-alone side project. However this is will still be ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Cursed
Amazing poem you have written you drew a picture in my head that is still there now. a few minor flaws in this piece do not keep this from being ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: At World's End
A fine job on this piece you say that this was not your best poem well I want to see whats better! I have to ask who is this person ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Tonight
Wow great work writing this its quite imaginative and original. Though I have no idea what we were trying to get though in this or maybe you just want to ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Angel of Death
Not too sure what the exact message was in this piece though if came do to a hit or miss I would have to say hit! Then flow was a ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Death Is An Angel
Not sure that I agree with the way life if portrayed in this piece yet the emotion make this great. You say that life is a true hell though I ...
Jun 27, 2010
