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This is a nice beginning, though the ending was a little bit cliche. Also, you have a problem with your tenses. You switch from past to present, which isn't good. ...

This is very...deep. This made me think for a while, which is something I look for in all writings like this. However, I feel like you are using too many ...

I absolutely loved this piece! All of the emotion was so strongly shown here, and I found that I can relate very well. I'm sure that everyone here has experienced ...

Now, unlike Scarecrow, I mostly give grammar critiques. I agree with Scarecrow on the point that this was well paced and very interesting. I enjoyed reading it, and I'll be ...

Hey perfect and welcome to our big (very big) dysfunctional family! Have a great stay here. So, if you write historical romance, do you put it in Historical fiction or ...

I can't decide. Anyway, I'll just put the only book that has ever made me cry. Where the Red Fern Grows Poor Old Dan and Lil Ann.

Hi, Michael. I see you're getting the works here. You're definitely going to have a great time here, and everyone's helpful and nice so don't worry. Do you have any ...

Hi, and welcome! Being honest, however brutal, is generally accepted here. Ripping works to pieces, as long as it helps, will always be present here. Ah yes, another question to ...

You know you're a writer when, scratch notebook, you have an entire folder dedicated to writing! You know you're a writer when you beg your parents for "Just ten more ...

Warts

Nope. My question: How would you describe chocolate to somebody who has never eaten it before?

I would probably faint. Either that or scream. After that, I would either keep quiet or tell somebody, depending on what the secret is. What would you do if you ...

The girl from Golden Compass (I can't remember her name right now) with a snowflake for hair. EnigmAAmginE

This whole thing is one conversation. It's from Scarecrow by Matthew Reilly. "We going that way, sir?" -Clark "Nope. We're going in the other direction, but to do that we ...

You know you're a writer when you have a shirt that says, "I have Writer's Block!" and wear it in public whenever you actually do have it. You know you're ...