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Re: A Walk in the Park
Not that long ago, not very far from here, there was a man, walking through a city park. I think you can omit the third comma. It seems like a ...
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Re: Hola everyone!
Hi Roo! Great to see you around here. I know what you mean by fizzle out. It's kind of frustrating (well, actually a lot frustrating). I usually get an idea ...
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Re: Meh.
No, but I've visited Bali a lot of times. I live in Jakarta. I think I've seen the person who's obsessed with him a few times. And yeah, I'm twelve. ...
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Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when you start writing on the table because you haven't noticed that you ran out of paper.
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Re: Japan/China/Asia/Geisha
Well, there's this one Chinese belief that women with small feet were found beautiful. As a result, women often bound their feet to make them smaller. Some women often ended ...
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Re: Silly, but Never Childish
This was beautiful. It moved me in ways I cannot express in words, and I loved it. Your mastery of words here (and everywhere else) is so wondrous. One small ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: I'll have a review extra value meal,
Do you request anything in return for reviews? I'll gladly give away stuff. Anyway, here it is. If possible, could you focus on the atmosphere? I seem to be having ...
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Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
I've never really seen somebody who'll review almost anything. This is pleasant. Title: Writing a Letter Genre: Other Fiction Brief Summary: Tradition is hard to break. Link: Do you want ...
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Re: Innocence Dies Young
“Eliza!” I shouted. I could barely hear my own voice over the rumble of the tanks. “Eliza!” I was quickly growing desperate. What if Eliza was gone? No, that couldn’t ...
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Re: Welcome to the Huddle
Hi! I'm WV, and I'm always open for co-writing! I'd prefer to not write romance, because I'm not that good at it. *sniggers at self* That's one of the main ...
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Re: Essential websites for anyone trying to get published
This list is amazing! I finally found out how to properly format a query letter. This is definitely a great list. Everything here's going on bookmarks!
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Re: I just can't start.
Yes, I find that reading helps a lot. I tend to stay away from it for a while, and exercise a bit or take a walk, or do anything that ...
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Re: The Sun and Three Rooms
Wow. This was really well written. I couldn't find much to nitpick here. My hands, shaking, reached up to the door and twisted the knob as he had told me ...
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Re: The "what if" game
What if every single god from every single culture was real and watching us like a TV show?
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