WaterVyper

Hi! I'd like to be your friend too, inksword. Well, what other interests do you have aside from writing? Here on YWS we have userrgoups, created for people who share ...

I think this looks good. There's also one for Open Office, but I can't remember where I downloaded it.

I haven't read it yet... Gonna be reading it next year for the class novel study, but I wonder how much it would spite my teacher if I were to ...

Hm, I remember going to the Borders in Singapore and sitting down in the kids' section with a book. There's this girl next to me, and she was reading as ...

"No! Get out of the way!" Aeriz dived down beneath the log, hearing Desanda's warning cry. He peered up, seeing nothing but devilish red eyes on black. "Get down!" Obeying ...

Poe, Frost, cummings, Shakespeare, and Plath are already mentioned. Gwendolyn Brooks isn't that bad, and neither is William Blake.

If you can, turn on the TV and watch Whacked out Sports. Calvin: Why does the sky turn red as the sun sets? Dad: That’s all the oxygen in the ...

*gasp* I though two plus two equaled magic! Thank you, oh wise one! *bows down for worship* Well, enough of that stuff. Hi! *waves frantically* I've been to Canada once, ...

I liked this a lot. It was very suspenseful, and I loved the tone you used for this. Love the ending. Just creates a depressing mood for this. And I ...

Hey Zakku! I'm Vyper, or whatever you wish to call me. Everyone's got almost everything down, but there's one thing that I just love to mention. Groups! Here on YWS, ...

Okay, I've seen this one. It's getting better. You have some more punctuation in, and it is beginning to sound nicer. Just one minor issue: If only it were not ...

I love Garth Nix and Cornelia Funke. A girl after my own heart. Well, I'm just passing by since everyone's explained all that you need to know. I haven't seen ...

This is a bit strange. I had to look up some of the worlds since they're a bit obscure to me. Well, on with the critique. Your flow is a ...

Basics:: Name:: Emily Age:: 12 Grade:: Eighth Group(Popular, jocks, skaters, goths, preps):: Nerdy smart person. Looks or pic:: Brown eyes, black-brown hair, and a bit chubby. Less than five feet, ...

Reviving this thread, just for a bit. I'll just quote what I said in another forums: Honestly, I have nothing against Meyer. She can make a good love plot, but ...