WaterVyper

Yes, Darren Shan lover! Now, my life is almost complete. I still think Demon Apocalypse was better than Lord Loss though. The Demonata series rocks, but his vamp series is ...

"New Falconreach looks awesome!"

I agree with thunder_dude. Ribbit sounds better.

I have a feeling this is like one of humongous epic adventures that involves some sort of retired hero. Not fantasy, but a modern day one. If not that, then ...

Hi carbonated! I'm Vyper, or whatever you want to call me. Before you go posting your work, we have a few rules you have to follow. These two are the ...

Robin My head snapped up, seeing Seline fly up into the air. An arrow was aimed straight for us, but she knocked it off course. I could see two bird-like ...

I haven't seen the movie yet, since it hasn't come out in Jakarta. I don't think it ever will. Right now, I'm looking for the DVD. If there is one. ...

Hey balletbabe12! I can see that you've read the rules, so I won't think we have any problems. However, just a couple of quick reminders. 1. Keep the 2:1 review ...

*Did I portray your characters right?* Aeriz shrugged. "Nothing beyond the usual. I've heard about the Daemon guy slaughtering everyone, but nothing after that. All I know is that all ...

This was very good, Zakku. Interesting concept. However, I feel that you're telling too much. Describe a bit, use metaphors and similes. The way this is going, it's kind of ...

This was an epic poem, God. Seriously. I actually deciphered the theme here, which I am very proud of. It's a very nice message you have here. Personally, I'd be ...

I agree with Snoink, neither of the two really catch my eye. If I found something like that in a book, I'd be pretty bored. I'd recommend you start with ...

I don't have that many. 1. Stop depending on others. 2. Learn how to fix technology 3. Lose weight 4. Help others as much as possible 5. Win a writing ...

Jane Doe Jakarta, Indonesia Dear Jane, If you're reading this, it means I've decided to leave. Either that, or you've found this before I could burn it. Before you go ...

Hi Llama duck! Here on YWS, we ask that you please review two pieces of work before posting your own. That being said, here's the nitpicky stuff. I can't really ...