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The Road Not Taken, by Robert Frost We had to recite that poem in fifth grade for graduation, I think. We had to memorize it, which I found surprisingly easy. ...

Hi telle, and I'll be your reviewer for today. You have a lack of capitalization in this poem, which was the first thing I noticed. Capitalizing the first word in ...

Hiyas Scarecrow! I remember seeing you around a couple of times ago. And, yeah. I'm off to review, but welcome back!

This is a very good piece, lilchoma! I like the way you wrote this; the repetition just flows into the poem. However, a few things that I feel remove from ...

I actually do enjoy television, but only because of Mythbusters. That show = Awesomeness! Though, I really want to see a YWS television show. That would be fun. I can ...

Okay, to get published, for one. And with someone legitimate, not a vanity publisher. Save up money as another. And pretty much lasting a week without YWS. I want to ...

This is so cute. I wish I could draw like you. It isn't fair thta you can draw so well, not to mention write with equal... darn, forgot the word. ...

Zan- Metal Apparently, what I thought was a few days worth of walking turned out to only take a day or so at the most. It was rare that somebody ...

Hiyas Matt! Great to meet you! I think I've seen your name around a few times, but I dunno. Anyway, great to see you here! Tell us more about yourself ...

Hello blackpencil! Welcome to YWS! Before you start posting your stuff up, there are two rules you have to follow at all times. They're easy to follow, so don't worry. ...

You know you're a writer when you feel like asking for money any time somebody asks you to write something. You'd make a fortune!

Well, there are two types of clauses: Independent and Dependent. I'll summarize what I learned in class. Independent: These clauses can stand on their own, like mini-sentences. For example, The ...

Hiyas SandSasoriluver! I'm a huge Akatsuki fan too, though I don't really like Sasori that much. Anyway, glad to meet you and welcome to YWS! We'd love to get to ...

Maybe you could let Ebony do something to get us all out of here?

Zan (Metal) I walked through the village, trying not to forcibly bring all the metals to me. The terrain here was hard, pretty much ore-rich rock. Not much soil or ...