User avatar

WaterVyper

  • Archive Re: Whispers

    Two characters would be fine. Just try to stay with only two. And it doesn't matter if the Voice is good or bad, if they have changed the world or ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What's the stupidest thing you have ever done?

    Ouch... Well, I have to say the stupidest thing I ever did was when I was three. I wanted to see what fire was like, so I grabbed at the ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hello Spraynard. Um... could we please ask that you follow the rules here? 1. Use proper spelling and grammar and capitalization at all times. We're writers on a writing website, ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: The Ultimate Showdown!

    Round 53: Mesh vs. Newbies The Newbies storm the Welcome forums with threads so full of atrocious grammar that everyone gives up on them. They do not listen to the ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What does this username make you think of?

    Somebody brave, and outspoken Elevate

    Mar 15, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Memoir; Networking

    Hi Serendipity! Sorry I took so long to get to this one. Well, I can say that this was almost perfect. The theme was good, and the ending line was ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Guardians chapter 1 part one Edited and extended

    Okay boltage, time for a bit of critique. There are a lot of errors here, so I don't think I'll try pointing them all out. You have some issues with ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: F**K IT ALL (Death Metal)

    Okay, your song here, it's kind of extreme. I'm no that good with lyrics, but they're similar to poems. I have to say at the beginning that this conveys strong ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: um... im new.

    Hello and welcome to YWS! It's good to meet you. Wow. It's difficult for me to write the 'real' fantasy, which is why I mostly stick to urban. What type ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello. I'm new here :)

    Hello Daniella! I'm Vyper, and welcome to YWS! Of course silly. Friends are always nice. Anyway, before you start posting your works, I'd better go over some of the rules. ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • OOC Archive Re: Whispers DT

    Yeah, all questions and suggestions here.

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Archive Re: Whispers

    Right. I'll make it.

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran

    I love the Percy Jackson books. They have a countdown till the release of the last book. As of right now, it is about 50 days, and 15 hours till ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Archive Re: Whispers

    You can have something that is considered a talent in this real world (playing an instrument, athletic, etcetera) and turn it into a superpower (make people fall asleep after listening ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm a Newbie!

    Welcome! I'm sure that with Monki helping you out, you'll be just fine. YWS isn't that hard to understand. I'm sure that you'll get the hang of it in no ...

    Mar 15, 2009


I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live?
— Homer Simpson