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Zan - Metal Hearing a shout, I immediately snapped my head around. I heard a quiet crack- probably my neck- but tried to focus on where it came from. Pressing ...

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Heya Roxi! It's great to meet you and welcome to YWS! Now, rules = check I guess I can go with the colors. Most of the colors have already been ...

Yo Chris. *waves* Looks like you finally decided to join YWS. Though, you do have to work on your grammar. Anyway, I guess I'm going over the rules first. Here, ...

That idea sounds good. And it seems that quite a bit of people are staying behind. Do you mind if my character joined the people who are going for the ...

I've stopped using Facebook for a while. One thing is the time it takes for everything to load, another is the fact that my mom is adding so many different ...

Ah, thanks a lot. That was quite helpful.

*Gah sorry, I'm on holiday. I managed to get in to sneak some internet, but I won't be posting much for a while.* "So, what do we do now?" I ...

Hi Strawberry and welcome to YWS! I see that everyone has already explained practically everything, so there's no need for me to go over that stuff again. The rules are ...

Emmalee - "Um..." I bit my lower lip, not knowing what to answer. "Green!" I blurted out randomly. "Light green..." I quickly berated myself. That was such an obvious lie. ...

Cathy - "Now, it seems that there are two people inside," Nick said. "Be careful. It appears that both of them are quite powerful." He paused for a while. "Mary, ...

Amala - I glanced around the room, noting that it was really full already. There were lots of people already sitting in the plastic chairs. I looked around. There was ...

Heya, and I have to say it's an interesting concept here. However, I'm a little lost on the title. What exactly is it? The skies darken As the sun dies ...

It's black all around, and you can't see anything. You can't even move. All of a sudden, you hear somebody whisper, "Hey buddy. What are you and who lost ya?" ...

I liked this one! I haven't seen your other poem, but this one is good. I didn't find any major mistakes, but you could try to capitalize the beginning of ...