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Hi and I'll be your reviewer for today. This is a good poem and I enjoyed it. The rhymes sound natural and overall, very good. You hold me high, keeping ...

This is a very good poem. You have nothing to worry about; the rhyme scheme is present throughout and it is nice and solid. I'll have to agree with Selene ...

Emmalee - I felt kind of bad for leaving the others, but I really didn't want to be late. Some people were having a conversation down in the corridor about ...

Hey Ellen! Welcome back! I probably won't recognize you, so I apologize. Anyway, you should know the rules and just about everything, so there's no need for that. What are ...

If this is still here, I'd like to join. Name: Reilly Age: 14 Gender: Male Personality: Quiet on the outside, quite random and loud on the inside, especially when he's ...

Hi Shadowlink and welcome to YWS! I think it's cool you want to be a lawyer. I want to be one, but I can't debate well enough. I prefer something ...

*I handed them to Henry*

Cathy - "Actually, I didn't know there was a meeting. I just found that there was a person who had a Voice here," Julia said. My frown deepened. If nobody ...

Once somebody eats it, it is technically theirs, right?

You know you're a writer when you have to physically fight the urge to correct all of your friends' work and also your teachers' because of all the horrendous mistakes. ...

Ooh, nice work, peanut. It was short and direct, one thing I liked about it. The word choice was appropriate and I could find only less than a handful of ...

Heyas Wish and welcome to YWS! Great to see you here! Now, we have some rules on YWS that need to be followed, and I'll be giving a quick rundown. ...

Amala - "Looks like they're here," I said. I lifted a hand to wave. "Hi everyone!" I shouted. The building had smoke coming out of the windows and parts of ...

Amala - "I hope I'm not late again," I said to myself. "I'm going to lose points for this one if I'm late. Lose twenty points and I only have ...

Emmalee - "What?" I asked, shooting up. Three people were there, Selena, Circus, and somebody else. The loud thump was what brought me out of the trance-like state I was ...