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Re: Sincerely, Smiley Face [Chapter 1]
This is the first chapter of my 2/3 completed NaNo novel. I'm starting to go back and edit it (so that maybe I'll get inspired and actually finish the thing). ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hi, wariofart here for a review. Let's get right down to it. General: Overall, I really liked the start of the book. You grabbed me from the beginning and had ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: F The World
Hey, here's this song I've written. It's a pretty fast paced pop-rock song. Verses are a little slower than the chorus. Looking forward to get some feedback on it, because ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Girl Next Door.
I really enjoyed this song. Even though I don't know the tune, the chorus seems like it could be really catchy. The topic of this is pretty cliche (boy meets ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: 5 words
, reason itself, wished to stop
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: NaNo Usernames 2010
Yep, I'm also the same, wariofart. Link for lazy people below wariofart
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: I feel like I have ADD ._.
I definitely have the same problem as you! Here's a couple of tips I've learned over the years of half-starting, never finishing. 1) Short Stories Short stories are your friend. ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Third Man
Well, this was definitely interesting. Quite original... I'm still trying to wrap my head around this, but I'm pretty sure I like it. I'm not going to nit-pick, because with ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] People Watching
I really like the idea of the story. I love to people watch too, so reading how Simon perceived people was interesting. He really is an interesting character. You also ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hola! Can you review my short story? It's for the September contest, and I'd love your opinion on it: The Artist
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Click, Click
Whoot, another contest entry! I love them so :D So this piece was pretty good. Grammar-wise, there were some mistakes. Story-wise, I felt the end happened way too quickly. At ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: [September contest] Snowballs
Wow, this was a really good story. Pretty amazing that you did this with a wacky short story generator. Overall: I really liked the style of the piece. Very descriptive, ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Artist
My scenario: Your story is about an artist in a glass elevator destroying New York City. Word Count: 990 Flames engulf the city as civilians run for their lives. I ...
Sep 18, 2010 -
Re: Fire
Hey, wariofart here. Gonna run through your poem, than give it an overall. We caught the fire raw limbed and ashy, crawling from your bedroom Yuck. Great imagery though. door ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: Reviews back in action!
Hey, can you review my short story? Thank you, and awesome avatar ;)
Sep 7, 2010
