Wariofart

I didn't think to part any of the tree branches or thorn covered vines

Hello everybody, I'm wariofart! I'm 14 years old, a casual writer and super excited about being here! I've actually signed up a few days ago, but just got around to ...

Unfortunately, there were turret guns all around you, preparing to fire at you.

Hi peoples! This is my first story, so please be HARSH! =P Thankies! :elephant: Here's me being HARSH. (comments in bold) Kat paused, her Mrs. Maclane

Okay, thanks to everyone who edited my story, I've updated and edited it, so hopefully all the mistakes are gone. Thanks again!

My comments are in BOLD I deleted anything I didn't edit to save space. His feet felt much too clumsy and big for him, but he wasn’t sure if it ...

If you haven't read Chapter 1 here's a quick summary, though I recommend you read it: Claire and several other people are barricaded in a church during a zombie apocalypse. ...

My comments are in BOLD "Mistia, you can see him now." Mistia looked up from her seat and stared at the nurse, searching for something on the nurse's face to ...

My comments are in bold She looks at me and giggles. I stare back with one eyebrow raised. “What’s so funny?” I ask, noticing my voice rose. I calm myself. ...

My comments are in blod "What all are you planning to take with you to the New york trip?"Betty asked her friend,Ashley. "I will be taking my cool dresses and ...

Here's both the prologue (short) and Chapter 1. Please review, this is my first story on this website!! Don't be afraid to be picky either. I've tried to edit my ...