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I liked it, I liked it a lot! As Freak said, victory is spelled wrong. As I read it, I got a clear picture of the narrator, and that's great. ...

Nice twist on a classic zombie story! So it's not humans that get infected, it's the animals this time, huh? I'd like to see how this shapes up, obviously it's ...

Hey, like the story so far! Just a few suggestions: 1. The dream sequence at the beginning seemed way to short, and not dramatic enough. If you made it longer ...

Here's Chapter 3 of my story, if you haven't read Chapters 1 or Chapter 2 , please read them or this quick summary: Chp 1: Claire and several other people ...

I decided to go out early in hopes that the little heat I di d have might begin to melt it away. It took a couple of tries but I ...

8/10, cool anime dude!

That's a great haiku So I'll write this short review I liked it a lot!

So hi all, [color=#BF00BF] I woke up from this nightmare which formed a very much part of my existence now, since they had left. I was gasping for breath. Although ...

When I feel myself waking, my mind is in a fog. As if the deep mist has fallen over it, clouding, and making it hard for my thoughts, my memories, ...

Okay, I was trying to edit this until I got to the part where she "profiles" her friends, and then I stopped. I'm pretty sure you want this to be ...

hi I liked the chapter. I think that you should make this more clear like if she can go to school and at work then why they can't go alone ...

Here's a short (short) story I wrote about a year ago, in Church. The style is strange, it's almost a cross between a poem and a story. I was inspired ...

When I write, I usually don't have a 'villain', but everyone has good and bad aspects to them. Everyone has something that they feel bad about, and everyone has good ...

Wario ->> Given the choice between reading a complete story that you can finish in one sitting, the beginning of a story, or part 17 of 30 of a story, ...

I have a few short stories I've finished, but either I can't find them (I wrote them on paper) or I think they are bad. And the reason you see ...