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Re: Name Change: From Young Writers Society to WriterFeed
WriterFeed sounds like a vibe-coded app. YourWritersSociety? Would keep YWS as the acronym but move away from the age restriction.
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Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
It's a script [gasp], so whatever you can do with it is greatly appreciated. If you could talk about how you felt about the characters, that'd be extra-super amazing. Thanks!
Jun 13, 2013 -
Re: Reconstruction workshop
If you're still reviewing, can you review the first part of the pilot episode for a fantasy TV show I'm trying to write? Thanks!
Jun 5, 2013 -
Re: Answer This Question in as Few Words as Possible...
It's not like I'm gonna play sports.
Jun 3, 2013 -
Re: CM's Hopefully Awesome Reviews (CMHAR for short)
Do you review scripts? You didn't say either way. If you do, can you review the first episode of my fantasy script? Obviously imagery and description here are less important ...
Jun 3, 2013 -
Re: Alfred Symon's Critic Clinic: Bringing Smiles since the 60's
Hey! Can I get a Quick Critique on a first chapter of my novel? I'd love a second opinion on it. Though it is rated 16+, is that okay with ...
Feb 9, 2012 -
Re: how do i.........
Hi! Welcome to YWS! It's actually really simple. "] You press the green 'Read/Write' button and from there, you can see a variety of different forums, like Poetry, Novels and ...
Feb 9, 2012 -
Re: Willing to give Free reviews.
Hey! Do you think you could review the first chapter of my novel, -Post? Thanks!
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: -Post (Chapter 1, #1)
Rated 16+ for alcohol, and sexual references, cursing and blood/gore (oh my!) This is the first chapter(s) of my latest NaNo novel. I had a really hard time deciding what ...
Jan 26, 2012 -
Re: The Hate List--- Pilot
Hey! I thought this was a good piece, especially for your age. You write very smoothly and everything flows amazingly, which is really great to see. I'll start off with ...
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: Reviews from an Arctic Monkey!
Hey, do you think you can review a movie script? I'd really love a second opinion on it. It's the beginning of my script, Level Up! Thank you in advance, ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: The War of the Swans: Prologue
Wow, this was actually really, really good. Your description and prose was very interesting and elegant to read, and I usually dislike stories about royalty. In the small space of ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Level Up! (Scenes 1-8)
Rated 16+ for language and slight sexual themes (PG-13?) Edit: Changed Ms. Glitter to Ms. Gilmore ------- INT. RAYNER’S ROOM - EARLY MORNING BEEP! BEEP! RAYNER’s eyes open. He hits ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Reclamation Chapter #1
Nitpicks A shout from the distance pulled mine and the attacker’s attention out of our battle and to the approaching man. The bold part sounds awkward. Maybe re-write it as ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
If it wouldn't be too much trouble, can you review the first chapter of my novel, Sincerely, Smiley Face ? It's for a contest , so be as harsh as ...
Feb 7, 2011