WalrusGumboot

My name is Suzanne I'm nearly 14 (will be in February) Hobbies ore mostly drawing, making digital art, and... uh... hanging out. I really like short stories and novels/novellas, both ...

Hi, whenever you get the time, could you please review chapter 2 of The Speed of Light? Thanks. You might want to read the description on the novel, or skim ...

Thank you for the comments! Very much appreciated, I needed a little self-esteem boost :D But I'm afraid you're mistaken on the distance to Betelgeuse -- ...Betelgeuse is currently thought ...

Chapter 2 As I lay in the white enclosure, I started thinking. I missed my home planet. I hoped I would see it again, but I knew deep in my ...

Sci-fi novel I'm working on, only posted the prologue and chapter one so far. I've only got one review of it so far and I'd like to have a second ...

I'm being general here, I don't have much time to write a really long review, but great job! I can spot very little here that's wrong at all. I really ...

First off, let me just say that I think this is really great, good premise, and the characters you've got have the potential to become very well developed. Nice work. ...

I like this one. Normally I don't go for stories like this with clichés, but you pulled it off nicely. Again like the above poster said there are a bunch ...

This is still in the unfinished phase, I know it needs a lot of work, especially the first chapter. I'm also aware of the numerous spelling and grammatical errors. So ...

Hi! I liked it, it was nice and vivid, but maybe it wasn't the best thing for you to put first. A good thing to start a story with is ...