WaitingForLife

This captures the essence of my attempts at writing perfectly! I've nothing to criticize, this was so true and very well written. Be proud of it, and do keep writing. ...

This was really great. No doubts there. Now, I could do some nitpicking, but I'm really not in the mood for that. But what I do suggest, is to calm ...

Thank you for the comments! :) Glad I'm not the only one who thought it good. With the ancient tribes I was going for something like we've all been part ...

I originally wrote this in my notebook and copied it in a rush onto the computer; that might explain some of the more stupid mistakes. But yeah, thanks for the ...

Second chapter, as the name suggests. Please go check out chapter one if you haven't already, to get the background. If you don't care for suggestive topics and coarse humor, ...

Heya, here as per request. ;) First thing that popped into my mind when I saw was: Wow, great shadowing. The hem of the shirt is amazing. The box and ...

Glad to be your first view and comment. Thanks and welcome to YWS! :)

Thanks for commenting. :) I changed the second-to-last line as per request. Good advice there.

So, I was writing random poetry (which sucked) on a history lesson today. But then this one sorta flowed out of my pen and I saw it had potential, so ...

Thanks for taking the time to comment. ^^ The over-describing could very well be the result of writing this only on lessons I'm extremely bored on. :D I'll be sure ...

The steady concrete underfoot is not as firm as it might seem. There are horrors you overlook; find me a mirror, let me scream. Beneath this mask of brittle glass ...

Thanks for the good feedback. :) Ouch, Blue, you have my sympathy. No-one should wake up at 5 am. D: Other than that, thanks for the compliment on the title; ...

A break from all the seriousness of my novels. This one will only be around six chapters. Contains slightly suggestive themes and mildly strong language. Rated K-16 as it says ...

Oh, not me, don't you worry at all. :P *currently scrambling through math homework*

Alrighty then, I reviewed your earlier chapter and I have to say... wow. Why didn't you write it like this in the start? This seems written by a different person. ...