WaitingForLife

Heya, long time, no read. :D Haha, got me laughing, this one did, which I may presume was your intention. ;) The characters are nice and fleshed out, as per ...

Heya, I only got through the first few paragraphs, but I have to say... this was brilliant. I really like your writing style and the clever wit of the MC ...

My entry to the BIG Random Story Theme Contest. Comments on how to improve it are warmly welcomed. Hope you enjoy! ---------------------------------------- The gravel crunched beneath the soles of my ...

Heya! Here to help to the best of my ability: :) As this is for an English class ( if I didn't completely misinterpret), I'll try to be as thorough ...

Another one of my random stories which might some day be extended into something larger. Sorry, guys haven't really been in the mood for writing at all lately, hence the ...

No problem, it was a joy to read. ^^ I know those feelings of frustration too well, at the moment I can't get a single word on paper. :D And ...

Hello! I'm Life and I'll be helping you out with your story today. :) You certainly have a lot of potential. This was really well written, and I found your ...

This was really nicely written, the rhymes flowed smoothly and the story itself was so unusual that it brought a nice little taste to it all. In my opinion, you ...

Thanks for all the constructive crit. ^^ Haha, I'm actually glad you were confused about what the main characters were, as that was sort of the point. BUT I'll put ...

Thanks a lot for the comment! :) As for the prologue thingy, this will only have like three parts to it, maybe four. I'm only going to write about the ...

Wow, it's been a while... (clears throat) Sorry, my writing vocals are a bit rusty. :D Anyhow, this is a quick idea I came up with, hope y'all like it! ...

Thank you for all the positive feedback! :) Good that I'm not the only one who thinks it's good, would seem vain. :P As for the flow, no, it isn't ...

Thanks for the reviews/comments! ^^ The point was to make it short, mostly cause I'm lazy. :P This just popped into my mind and I had to write it down. ...

Have been inactive for various reasons, so thought I'd post something I wrote a while back. It's an over-done account of finding the right words for that special occasion. Just ...

So... I was happened to be listening to this song at the same time: , and it went perfectly with this. Jus' sayin'. Anyhow, two suggestions: In the very first ...