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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Torture Scene

    He came to with a thudding headache, eyes closed against the dull pain. The back of his skull throbbed like a whore's heart; he bit out a curse and moved ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: And That Is All

    The knife descends upon my wrist with grim understanding, sighing its bloodlust as it cuts through the air. I close my eyes and grin in anticipation. The grin quickly twists ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Game On (Level 2)

    Heya, here again for some thoughts! I have to say, I was really, really happily surprised to see how much your writing - technically that is; as in commas and ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Of Toads, Peaches and Teenage Angst - Chapter 4

    Princess Peach was kidnapped and Josh has agreed to save her. King Toadstool has promised Josh the aid of his son, Tick, who would work as his guide. ---------------------------- The ...

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Game On (Level 1)

    Yo, I was happily surprised to see you had put up the second chapter as well. Let's dive right in. Another good chapter all in all, I really am starting ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Game On (Level 0)

    Heya, Life here to throw a few things your way! :) This is a really solid piece of writing. The humor was effecient, and kinda reminded me of my own ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Toy Guns

    Hey, Life here to give a few thoughts. I really, really liked this. You had a very strong atmosphere going on, and your choice of vocabulary effectively enhanced that feeling. ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Of Toads, Peaches and Teenage Angst: Chapter 3

    It's been forever since I posted anything from this novella. Sorry about the long wait, but here we are again. If you haven't read the first two chapters, they're an ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Ka! Ta! Na!

    Hi there, Life here to comment (as you can't really call this is a review). :) Off the bat, this had that hint of epicosity which rang well with the ...

    Aug 7, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Death's Wings - Prologue

    I really, really, REALLY have to stop making these parallel projects... But I can't help it! This idea was too epic to left unwritten, even if I'll never finish it. ...

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter One (2)

    Ciao, my friend, Life here! (Ah, that always makes me chuckle... "Hello, I'm Life, great to meet ya!") This really is growing interesting, I can't wait for that big and ...

    Aug 3, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: (I Really Should Think Of A Title) - Whole of Chapter 1

    Raul opened his eyes to the warm greeting of a new day. The open window spilled in the noises of the street below; an early shopkeeper was busy rattling in ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: (No Title Yet) - Chap. 1, Part 2

    A/N: I'll be gone for a week or so, which is why I'm posting all that I've written thus far of this. Mind you, it's largely unedited and I might ...

    Jul 19, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: (No Title Yet) - Chap. 1, Part 1

    17th century - Campania, Italy --------------------------------- Raul opened his eyes to the warm greeting of a new day. The open window spilled in the noises of the street below; an ...

    Jul 16, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Retards Attempting Poetry :)

    So.... I got reeeally bored. I just listened to a rap song, while watching the music video, and was vividly reminded of a saying of my ex-math teacher: "RAP: Retards ...

    Jul 3, 2011


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon