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Re: Lonely September Testicles
I'm not completely sure what I just read, but I know damn well that this is my sort of humor. :D I'm guessing you're informing the world that you're not ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Corpse Pile
Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I could go on and point out things I liked the most, but meh, I've nothing more to say. I feel horrid for writing such a horrid ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: noisullI
i am but a thoughtless thought an idea without a maker, a truthful lie an itemless payer. a living dead without the apocalypse. i think without thinking of a blackened ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Tie me up and love me
Wow, a really nice piece and I definitely enjoyed it. I speak from personal experience that a rhyme scheme can be a real pain in the backside, but you pulled ...
Oct 1, 2011 -
Re: All that happened
Hey! I'm going to be the odd one out and not tell you to smack in more details. I get the sense that this was meant to just be a ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: My Dark Angel- Prologue
Hey! So I'm gonna do the obvious think and point out that it might be a bit too short. But then again, I did want to know what happened next, ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Ties and Nooses - Chapter 1:: Part 2
Accidentally posted this in Short Stories originally, so just posting it here for clarity's sake. PART 1: topic87450.html CHAPTER 2: topic88074.html ------ Sully arrived at his workplace dripping wate
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Game On (Level 5)
Aaaand here we are. You created some definite tension in this one, especially between Crodela and the MC. Tension is good. I also enjoy your lack of care when it ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Game On (Level 4)
I don't know how, but you managed to slip this past me. O: I was checking out my feed and noticed you had already posted Level 5, so I got ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Ties and Nooses - Chapter 2: Part 1
A/N: This is a bit too long, I know, but there just wasn't any unawkward place to cut it. If I would've cut it at one point, the next part ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Apocalpse:What now? Prologue
Heyou, I figured as you were going through my work, I had to at least come here and check yours out. Frankly, I'm glad I did. No, this might not ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Ties and Nooses - Chapter 1: Part 2
A/N: Just like last time, this part contains profanity. Pretty much of it. Maybe too much. Meh. So, like last time, think thrice before succumbing to your rebellious natures all ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1
Heya, I'll be ignoring all the earlier comments, so if there are some redundancies, blame them on my laziness. Also, I just pulled an all-nighter so forgive me any small ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Ties and Nooses - Chapter 1: Part 1
A/N: I decided to use a short story I wrote as a prologue to a vaster piece (this one). If you want to check that out, the link will be ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: You aren't supposed to remember -A 9/11 memoir
Hiya, Mr. Impressed here to revi- no wait, just comment really. :D So, Mr. Impressed is Impressed, as you might've already fathomed from my introduction. This has meaning; it has ...
Sep 7, 2011
