WaitingForLife

Heya, As said before me, you have a gift in writing, and this seems like a very interesting story you're cooking up. I did find a few nitpicks, but they're ...

Thanks for the feedback! That article was very helpful, thanks alot for that ultraviolet! :) You had good points and I'll try to make this chapter clearer. Just to make ...

Hullo, Ill be reviewing your story, hope it helps :) Before I get to the nitpicks and such, I'd like to say I really enjoyed your descriptions in the beginning. ...

Alrighty then, I'll review your story for you. Straight out of hand, I'd advise you to take your time in describing scenes and the actions more carefuly. Reading through your ...

Alrighty, the second chapter of my novel~ish thing. If you haven't read the first chapter, I advise you to check it out first to get the setting right. Feedback is ...

Hey, This is going to be a pretty useless review, seeing as I can't find anything to criticize. The rhymes were all there and great. The flow was smooth. The ...

Its short and straight to the point, which gives it an even sadder aura. Simply stating the facts tends to be a good course many times when trying to create ...

This is something I started a few summers back and have just begun to write again. It's an attempt at a first-person approach, so please tell me how bad I ...

Allright, Ive tried to edit it up to date now. Thanks for the replies and so on and so forth :D

This is truly a touching poem. I enjoy reading poetry eventhough I can't write it at all, and I enjoyed reading this particular one. The only thing I suggest you ...

I completely agree with the comments before mine. Your'e a really good poet and your skills haven't certainly gotten rusty or anything. That, or you just got lucky with this ...

Hey, WaitingForLife here to review your poem, I really liked this work. True, it is sort of depressing, but in my opinion depression is a very strong emotion that is ...

Thank you for taking your time and reviewing this, I really appreciate it ^^ Ill be editing the glitches you mentioned tomorrow or the day after, just as soon as ...

The blade twisted in the wound. The tall figure garbed in pure shadows cocked its head in vague interest. The young man in armor at least two sizes too big ...