WaitingForLife

Hey, Just stopping by to say that I really enjoyed your poem. The emotions felt real and raw, and your word choice and register seemed in place. Oh, and I ...

Heya, Life here to review! First of all, welcome to YWS! You've got potential and I'm sure you'll enjoy it here. ^^ On to the review: I found this piece ...

Hey, This is a nice little poem; it contains a lot of emotion, and seems, forgive my lack of professionalism in poetry, to be well written. But in my opinion, ...

I woke up droopy eyed and scratching various places. I felt a moment of incomprehension, trying to sort out my surroundings. The events of yesterday came back to me slowly ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll like it here. ^^ So, umm... what should I say? This was very well written, it had no gramatical issues, you ...

Thank you for the comments, glad all you liked it ^^ I like to dabble in different forms of writing, so I might post more poems too. Yours truly, |Life|

Hey, this: is chapter 3 of a Sci-Fi novel I'm working on (it's not really classic Sci-Fi but oh well). If you could concentrate more on the character development aspect, ...

This is going to be a pretty useless comment, but I wanted to drop by and say that I absolutely loved this. I couldn't find any nitpicks (truth be told, ...

Heh, this made me laugh, which was the point of it I guess, so good job! :) Nothing really to criticize except that it's written "invisible". ;) But yeah, keep ...

Off the bat, you've got a talent for writing. Really. I'm pretty sure you already knew this, but just felt like pointing it out. You've got a good main character, ...

Well, first of all, I liked the story in itself. You have a good and believable main character, eventhough he is a vampire, which is a good thing to have. ...

Chapter 3 The puzzlement must have shown on my face, because her - and it was most definitely a her - full, red lips curved into a self conscious grin. ...

M'lord Lord Anzius, I cometh here humbly to review thy text. :D Jokes aside, I thought this was a good account of Finnish music. I personally hate Finnish music, (mostly ...

Heya, First things first: I really liked the idea. One thing that caught my eye was the fact that Maya had a disease or something (I'm not sure what, but ...

No mind. No feelings: Not evil, not kind; No limits, no ceilings. His body an instrument, His training the musician; His thoughts does the icy steel supplement, His instincts guiding ...