WaitingForLife

Hey, Life here to review! First off, welcome to YWS! :) I'm sure you'll enjoy it here. You certanily have a knack for writing, but that doesn't mean that there's ...

Hey Mazey, thanks for the review! :) Haha yeah, changed it to scones, thanks for pointing that out. :D You got the characters' personalities pretty much spot on, and by ...

A random story wrote at 5 am. Hope you enjoy! ^^ [WARNING: Contains very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating.] Damion Kale lounged comfortably in a gilded chair of brass, ...

Thanks again for the review! :) First of all, I didn't find your review short at all, just sayin'. ;) You had valid points, and I'll try to cut down ...

Heya, thanks for the comment! :) Yeah, I've actually got a decent idea of how to continue this already. It's just a matter of if I feel like continuing it ...

Hey, thank you so much! :) I was sort of nervous to post this, as I have no clue of the right "structure" of a poem, I just go by ...

Life here again to review! :) So, this part of the chapter was more of character development than anything else. You showed us the main character's feelings and introduced us ...

Thankyou for the comments! :) Changed it to "by candlelight". In the third stanza, he is, ah, taking her virginity, to sound as non-graphic as possible. :P And if my ...

He swoops in with a predator's grin. Sweeps her of her feet with his charms and guile. He conceals his fangs behind a mask of love, waiting for an opening, ...

Hey, I really like this! ^^ I loved your use of extreme contrast (black and white) and your wording had a good rythym to it. Nothing to critique really... But ...

Heya, Life here to review! :) My first impression: Oh, this is going to be another one of those-- wait a second... In other words, the first line didn't really ...

Hey, First of all, this was damn funny! (props for that ;)) I'm not an expert on art, but this seemed well balanced, by which I mean that there wasn't ...

Glad you liked it! ^^ I actually started writing this to practice my fight scenes, so it's great that you found it thrilling, seems I succeeded to some extent at ...

[It's quite long; I thought of posting it in two parts, but decided against it in the end, so please bare with me. ^^] The cold links of steel grinded ...

Hey, Life here to review! :) First things first... Welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here. ^^ On to ze review itself... I really liked the idea, and ...