WaitingForLife

I really like your way of drawing! :) It's sort of like a professional toddler's pictures (pray don't take it the wrong way, I mean it in a good sense ...

Heya, sorry that this took so long...but better late than never. ^^ You've built an interesting plot here. I'm guessing that Kat and gang are a special-ops hit team for ...

Thanks for all the compliments Bladesmith! :) Black humor is something new I'm trying, so I'm glad that people find it funny. That might just mean that I have a ...

My first idea was that it would only have around 5 parts, but now I've found a liking to the story, and, I admit, am completely hooked with these characters. ...

Hey Bladesmith, thanks for the advice on the rapier! ^^ I myself happen to love weapons of all sorts (though I don't really understand the "mechanics" involved in the making ...

Thanks for the helpful advice. :) Your concerns about the Garden are just, and I have planned to use it later on, for exactly the reason you said (I don't ...

[WARNING: Contains very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating] A large troop of scarlet on black marched down the spacious courtyard of the Duke, which housed the infamous Dusk Garden. ...

Hey ElementalBlood! ^^ I'll come back later to give you a full review (as I'm on a tight schedule), but I really liked the idea and the wording of this ...

Thanks for another comment Mazey! :) Your question was a good one. My idea basically was that Ryne had infiltrated Maximillion's ranks; I'll have him explain it in the coming ...

Hey, thanks for the comment! :) This might yet become a prolouge, as I've been trying to rack my brains since writing this to think of a way to continue ...

[WARNING: Contains very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating] Enjoy! Damion stuck out his tongue at the back of the retreating Duke. This caused a general chuckle to escape the ...

Thanks for the comments again everyone! ^^ Oh, I thought I'd rated it 18+, seems I forgot. Sorry about that; I'll change it immediatley. SCONCES, SCONCES, SCONCES.... I guess third ...

So... How should I say it... This was bloody brilliant! I won't be giving you any real review, because quite frankly, I have nothing to critique aside from what Kafkaescence ...

Hey, thanks (again) for the review! Your points have been remedied (is that even a word? :D). And yes, I thought about the thing with the crossbow too actually. It ...

Alrighty then, Life here to review! I really liked the plot you've got going on here, especially because you were basically keeping the reader in the dark, witholding vital information. ...