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Re: sense is gone, gone with the wind
”You know... I always thought it would be the other way around. I'm still quite shocked it turned out this way, buddy.” He was wearing a long leather jacket, all ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: The Nihilistic Antelope
Fuck yeah! This really fit into my mood at the moment, so thanks for a great read! Normally I would comment on the extensive use of question- and exclamation marks, ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: A Story of a Ship and its Sailor
Heya! The message in this was a good one. However, I think the poem itself could be, and should be, polished a bit more. First thing, your rhyme scheme. The ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: The Cigarette In Her P****
Heya! One of the most interesting poems I've read in a while. I admire your balls for writing something as graphic and raw as this. It was the perfect way ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Shadow: Chapter 1 part 1
Well, well, well. This was... really good actually. :D I especially enjoyed your descriptions of the fight, the little tweaks and twists that took it away from "he attacked, he ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Charred One: Second Chronicle
The wind murmured through the barely-clad trees, their spindly forms creaking with rheumatic age. The leaves still clinging to the branches danced, fluttered and twirled their way through the eddies ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Charred One: First Chronicle
I took out the clothes from the chest. A simple uniform for a simple man. It had been ironed only the night before, the crisp, sharp folds precise. I methodically ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Scion [Chapter 1]
Damn you for cutting the chapter off at that point, damn you real good. :D Now you've got me hooked and waiting for the next part. I usually do nit-picks ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Black Stork - Part 2
First half, if you missed it: ----------------------------------------------- ”Heya! You sent for me,” said the Stork, never being able to resist the theatrics. The master did the bad-guy equivale
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Martyr
Kneel down and clear the stone of leaves. Take a deep breath, let go your fears, feel the dark prescence behind you; The weight of death hangs heavy in the ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Paul('s Case): Triumph or Tragedy?
Paul('s Case): Triumph or Tragedy? At first glance, Paul's Case is a rather obvious tragedy, seeing as Paul commits suicide to escape a world that is not meant for him. ...
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: Ties and Nooses - Chapter 2: Part 2
”I guess-” Sully panted in a shaky breath. ”I guess it's safe to say it does extend.” Amy smiled a dazzling smile at him and headed off to clean up ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Please ignore this, my computer failed to co-operate. -.-
------------------- This is a story of Hades. You may have heard of him. Or you think you've heard of him. What you've heard is only what he wants you to ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: And ignore this one too. Sorry for the inconvenience.
------------------- This is a story of Hades. You may have heard of him. Or you think you've heard of him. What you've heard is only what he wants you to ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Black Stork - Part 1
------------------- This is a story of Hades. You may have heard of him. Or you think you've heard of him. What you've heard is only what he wants you to ...
Oct 6, 2011