WaitingForLife

Heya! Nice job here. :) The flow is great, a consistent 7-6-8-6, which gives it a good structure, and the rhyme scheme worked. Your word choice was good and varied, ...

Hey, Life here to review! :) Wonderful idea! I loved the way you described the "wierd, wacky" world through channel surfing, as it is how we get almost all our ...

Haha, no sweat Mazey. ^^ It's not like I'm forcing you to read these so that you have to apologize for not reading it sooner. And how could you survive ...

Thanks! :) I suggest the use of a thesaurus to spice up your language. You can find a free one on the internet, no sweat. And I'd be mildly surprised ...

I am smooth as velvet pure; akin to a smoky breath, my taste runs darker than rum. I'm a fragrance rejected by the spectrum of seven. Cimmerian crashing waves in ...

[WARNING: Contains very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating.] So, just re-posting this work into the "Novels" section; I'll re-post the rest of the parts every few days, so as ...

Hey, Spitfire, thanks for the review. :) Oh, thanks for pointing out the bleeding nose part. I added it in after posting, so I forgot to mention it again later ...

Alright, I guess I'll do just that then. ^^ I was just thinking that it would seem, ah, I can't find a word for it. As I've already posted them ...

So, this work of mine has expanded enough to be considered the makings of a novel. Instead of re-posting each chapter again into the novels section, or just posting one ...

I just noticed that I never actually responded to anyone commenting on this... Ah, the days of an arrogant young writer... Better late than never I guess, so THANK YOU ...

Heya, thanks for the advice! :) In response to your suggestion about commas, I wrote this piece in a style hugely unlike my usual one. I went for a very ...

Haha, thanks...I guess xD As for why they outlined their plan, well, you'll see later. ^^

Heya Life here again, Another great chapter, Paul. ^^ The description of the memory was really well done; it seemed as if that could really be the case in the ...

No problem, my pleasure actually. ^^ I was extremely bored and reading/reviewing this got time to move faster for a while. :D

Hey! It's good to have new faces here, though I am pretty new myself, and I'm sure you'll like it here. ^^ Oh, and I really liked your first chapter; ...