WaitingForLife

[WARNING: Contains very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating] Sorry that this took so long guys (and girls), but it took me a while to find the inspiration. So here ...

Heya, thanks for the crit! ^^ I might just delete the sixth stanza altogether, as I wasn't that sure about it in the first place either... The stanza where you ...

Heya, welcome to YWS! ^^ I liked this. Your poem had a very nice rythym to it, except in the very last line. It was too long compared to the ...

[WARNING: Contains very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating] The last of my re-posts; the next chapter hasn't been posted before. It airs shortly after review day. A large troop ...

Hey, thanks for the critique! :) Yeah, haha, wrote this in like 20 minutes to kill time in the morning. :P But I liked it and wanted to see if ...

Thanks for the comment! :) My computer is retarded and doesn't want to flip the quotations marks around, so nothing I can do there. :P But yeah, the second part ...

Thanks for the comments on this! :) Sure thing Paul, I'll PM you when the next chapter is up. Oh and btw, it's "Nobles and Beggars", but let's not get ...

Thankyou so much for the comment! :) I'll think of a better word than "white-ish" if it was indeed the only thing you saw it lacked. :P

Thanks Paul, I'll see what I can do about the gore. ;) I have no intention of dropping this; rather I'm trying to come up with a better scheme for ...

Water is incorrect I'm afraid. :P Uu, another really nice guess with good evidence behind it, eldermimi, but it's not what I'm looking for. ^^ Over-analytical is the right word; ...

A Prayer of Understanding Angry shouts and scorching flame, Pounding feet and steely fangs; My bloody paws strike the sand. Lengthened shadows all around Cast by the flickering moon. I ...

[WARNING: Contains very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating] Enjoy! Damion stuck out his tongue at the back of the retreating Duke. This caused a general chuckle to escape the ...

Hey, thanks for the review! :) Yeah, I figured myself that the 4-5-4-5 stanzas might cut the flow, but I felt like trying it out. Now I'll delete that and ...

Nice try and good evidence supporting your answer, but I'm afraid the Black Sea is incorrect. ^^ That been said, you were correct in assuming it's the color spectrum. Also, ...

Crisp scent of bitter chill Crackle of frost broken Small tracks of padded feet Treading the steepest route Young pride truly foolish The eager sniff of nose Quick snort when ...