WaitingForLife

Yay! Thanks a million. :) I'll try not to press that button again... :P

Thanks a lot all of you. ^^ I'll see what I can do about the things you suggested and thanks again. :P I'll most probably delete this on the morrow ...

Thanks niapitts! ^^ Yeah, that's what I meant by going over-board at times... But oh well, I quite like it this way. Any suggestions anyone on how to possibly improve ...

Heya, first off, thanks a million for inspiring me to find help from the community for my poem for Valentine's Day. :) Now, I warn you, this'll be short, but ...

So, as Tanya said, Kafka covered the corrections. Just stopping by to let you know I'm still thoroughly enjoying this and I can't wait to read that last part. The ...

Thanks for all the positive comments on this, they were appreciated. :)

Thanks for the comments Paul and Spitfire. :) No-one would indeed like that sort of thing, Spitfire, and that's exactly why it's there (sick, sick me :P). But jokes aside, ...

Thanks for all the comment! ^^ I'll clean it up mostly as you suggested Kafka. The lack of capitalization is completely intentional; in fact, I had to really strain not ...

I was scrolling through old files and writings and I came across this, chuckled and decided to share it. I wrote it for my English class in 8th grade, and ...

I actually do mean literally built from marble. It's all intentional though, as I use the manor with its walls as a metaphor of the Duke himself. And besides, in ...

Oh... Now I see what you mean. It does sorta break up the flow; I'll fix it straightaway. Glad it came out good. ^^ Thanks for that.

so funny. i'm laughing. sarcasm seethes off tongue, i hope it scalds on the way; emotion wreathed in flame, ruins picture-perfect day. come break me. destroy me. heave me off ...

Heya, I actually noticed this was up two minutes after launch, lucky me. I'll throw in things that popped up while reading, not much crit though I'm afraid. ;) The ...

Thanks for the review! ^^ Yeah, I noticed the double-link thingy myself. It just doesn't let me fix it; I've no clue why. :D I'll change those things you mentioned. ...

Thanks SubZero! ^^ I personally like the word "chorus", so I'll keep it. :P The other mistake: fixed. Good questions, Spitfire. First one: it was too dark to see properly, ...