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Re: Private Moment
I've been working on some prose, so this wasn't what I was planning on posting next. In fact, I had no idea this would ever be written, but I thought ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Mother's Day
Hey megsug, I enjoyed reading this piece, and I hope your mother likes it too! First, I'll just point out a couple of little things, to get them out of ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Chasing the Sunrise
"Idunn Sofie: I'm glad it turned out okay ^^" Okay?... It's bloody fantastic. I was merely expecting to see a few pictures and maybe a paragraph or two of writing. ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: To this Community
This wasn't what I planned to write next, nor is it my usual. But in a moment of introspection, it came out. I'm sure there's some people here who can ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Sinews
I saw this whole thing in as a grainy black and white film noir in my mind, very emotive stuff. It switched to like an old Super 8mm image saturated ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Pianissimo: The Gentle Fall of Rain
Really enjoyed reading this, and about your explanation for the parts it makes total sense (and I like your use of terms of musical dynamics, pretty clever)! Reading this I ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: You just gotta hang in there.
I have to say that a wasn't expecting that at all, but it was great! By the time I got to the end it just had me hoping that one ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Watched - Chapter 1
Very, very nice. Having not read the prologue, I'm intrigued to read on and find out more! I have to say I love your descriptive prose, it's excellent at setting ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: God the Dealer
I just wanted to take a quick moment to say thanks to all of you, your feedback is much appreciated, and I'm glad there were some readers who really liked ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: No Manual
Hey, I liked read this. It's an internal question we all go through at some point, and I enjoyed how you put it with the rhetorical questions which you then ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Greetings
Wow, those sound like some pretty intense subjects you're studying there, awesome stuff. I have to say I'm very impressed by your grasp of languages, hopefully we'll see some multilingual ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Dangerous Temptations
Marissa Calhoun burst out of the nightmare by the sound to the annoying sound of a phone ringing. I can see this is where you went back to edit, I ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: God the Dealer
@tydecker777 Thank you very much, I'm glad it made you think. It is supposed to hold that rawness you talk about, and just "leaving the substance" was my aim :) ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: In West Philadelphia, I was born and raised...
@SmylinG Thanks very much, glad I didn't come off bad. I always feel like I'm being pompous talking about myself, so I just try and avoid it :wink: Our band ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: God the Dealer
Okay, this is my first "proper" post here, so all feedback is greatly appreciated. Give me praise or rip my work to shreds . It all helps! :D Just so ...
Apr 12, 2011
