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Re: Awakened
This was amazing! my favorite part is: No opinions, never firing up my cannons, Shooting out my bullets, Under suppression pleasing others. This poem is amazing, i wish i could ...
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Re: Through my screen.
That was well poetic! i guess it's a poem it's supposed to be poetic. But i read alot of poetry on here and i am a poet in myself but ...
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Re: BloodLust
this is verry good! the only mistake is this Catches you up, Never lets you you had a comma yet you still capitalized never, but this poem is verry strong ...
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Re: Journeying Through my Mind
Epic!
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: POV Switches
I know what pov means but does it stand for somthing?
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Migration
That was amazing! i liked it very mutch, It's only fault is rhym. But not all poetry has to rhyme so thats not mutch of a default. it goes together ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: No longer a poem!
This is amazing! You are a true poet! It all fits so poeticly! The rymeing is exceptional! i like the story behind it, it really tells about jesse james. there ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Bunny :)
that is an absoloutly adorable bunny! and the picture is so clear, HD even.
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Broken Ground
I liked it other than this part here: I grasped tightly to that promise, To that world in your eyes Until it was the only ground, The only solid footing ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: deleted
That was exceptional work! I really like the last paragraph. It rymes in a lovely manor! I realize I should tell you things I didnt like about it. But to ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Capturer of Hearts
this rocks!!!
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: This is no longer a book!
i love this!!! you get the ponit i reall like this
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Free
love it!!!
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: 18
omg inspiring and awesome! i love it!!! you have talent in writing i seriously think you could be a great poet!
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Torn In Half
this is awesome!!!
Jul 31, 2011
