WRITINGNEON

I like this :) really good sorry i'm bad and pointing out the bad in stories so this isnt the most helpfull review sorry :( But i really like this ...

That is amazing! The whole point of it is great, It's a quite beautifull peice. I like how you describe it as a story how in the future you will ...

Oh my gosh that is the cutest bowl of rice I have ever seen!

first of all on the first line were you say "I died and tried tried and died" you didnt capitalize the I leaving it as "i diead and tried treid ...

I love this! i'm slightly dissipointed that this exceptional peice is not longer.... But it is trully awesome! I will be honest with you it feels more as a draft ...

This is exceptional! The story is defenitly diferent but normal isn't good so i loved it! I'm not exactly sure if it is about a girl locked out of her ...

That was awesome it started out like a happy poem and ended rather dramatic, defenitly one of those poems that glues you to read even more! It almost brings chills! ...

This is epic! you choose your words wisely which makes this good

She raises the gun to her head pulls the trigger and lets the bullets fly, I know your secret he quivers you tried to commit suicide, a pool of blood ...

I... I... love it! And yes it defenitly fits in dramatic poetry, I love the story that it tells it's almost narative poetry! I absoloutly love it, i know i ...

Exceptional work! You have a style that not everyone has a special style. You have talent i love this poem. you should start a poetry club and share you poetry ...

I love this! the only mistake i found is "afresh." it should have been a fresh other than that i absoloutly loved it! exceptional work. There are so many talented ...

I like this because it tells a story and has a very vivid point! I liked the pictures defenitly a good touch. You have talent in poetry. Never give up ...

:?: :?: You could name the manager kate and call it kate's coffe?

This was so good, you use exceptional wordage in your poems, it brings them to life! There are no mistakes in this poem as far as i see, You write ...