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Re: The story of Jacqueline
Hi there! Incoming review ^-^ For starters, you certainly have mastered the art of hooking your reader. I couldn't have stopped scrolling even if I wanted to. Even though it ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising: Prologue
Hi! Wow-- suspenseful! And I loved your descriptive language, it really brought emphasis in all the right ways. I enjoyed this writing; I take it is a prologue, considering the ...
Mar 8, 2023
