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As I stare into the mirror of Erised - I don't see my 20 year old self. I see a man surrounded by computers, people discussing their ideas excitingly, pictures ...

Good chapter, although it still has the same problem as the last chapter... not enough description in their surroundings. I'm starting to quite enjoy this book I'd find it fascinating ...

What would you prefer? Insomniac Joyriding Vampires? Or Bloodthirsty Joyriding Maniacs? XD I like how it begins however, I feel like it's kinda unclear of where they are... one minute ...

Hi, nice to meet you, I'm Mark... I'm also new to the forums I just joined yesterday. I think I'll just read your stories...

Yeh I should had done that, maybe next time I'll plan it out better oh well it was a good attempt.

As I said if I had more time to work on it- I would add a lightning bolt in the background I can't change the background colour without the writing ...

thanls but Llama looks like to only have given us by the end of today... that's not nearly enough time to finish the book's design =/

Not sure if everyone would just go and have some lunch elsewhere just like that, but the script is ok I guess.

I admit I'm not a very good artist but if I were to design a book's front cover I would probably design it like this, was a little unsure whether ...

aww cool... I never thought I'd meet someone like me, lol.

"Damn... Drawf..." his eyes slowly close as he starts to fade out of conciousness. The sound of orcs and various other monsters growing louder, a mysterious door with a carving ...

Mist starts to fill the air as a dark shadowy figure approaches, everyone turns to face what could very well be their foe. Readying their weapons as the figure approaches ...

CHARACTER: name- Thomas Jackson age- 21 gender- Male race- Wizard appearance- You peer into the wizard's deep brown brown eyes, his beard short and neat, his brown hair windswept and ...

ks thankyou ^-^

Yeh I think it needs more characters, nothing wrong with no characters it just adds more personality to your story ^-^