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actually it kinda was with all that text... you might want to move the link to the bottom or something... :S

I found the DT :P

^_^ k

we need 1 more :S

Yeh like I already said: I didn't intend it to be bright blue I was going to put it in dark blue with the lightning strikes from the original cover... ...

Tracker: Name: Mark. Age: 20 Gender: Male. Race: Half-elf, half-human. Alligence: Anyone who's higher in command but usually goes with gut instinct. Appearance: Brown hair, green eyes, scar across lef

awwww It's sleeping.

It looks great although it kinda looks like you squished the width a tad... is there a bigger more clearer version of this?

Wow! Nice.

I like this one better than the other one... it looks like a front cover should.

Welcome! I'm Mark, I'm also new to the forums.

I can't help but think you made that idea based upon my title xD But good job, I like your entry... it portrays what shallow people are into and don't ...

I think you should probably improve your chapter titles... they are a little long and I feel like this chapter title doesn't relate to what is going on... I would ...

Thank you for your feedback Midnight, I made the corrections. Escape, as for your comment about: "I terms of Harry Potter relevance I feel it falls a little short, I ...

He probably needs help too lol