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Re: In Oculis Draconis DT
There isn't a triplet... there is only a green dragon and a white dragon as far as I'm aware: unless they have somehow taken flight I doubt that there's even ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: In Oculis Draconis DT
Just to make sure... it says 800 characters minimum, I ain't adding anything else to what I posted I'm just making sure I'm in within the maxmium/mininmum amount I am ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*
Northern Courtyard - Palace Arwen ¬ My head pounding as if a drummer was using my skull to practise with. I groaned and rolled over, curling into a ball, clutching ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Quidditch for first years
Thanks Heather, I made those corrections and I'll look into how to make the story more "action-driven".
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*
Mark was wandering around in the forest, eyes peeled for any squirrels he could use for pelts. He heard a loud noise that sounded like a dragon cry... his eyes ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: In Oculis Draconis *Dead*
George noticed his sword was vibrating as the sword changed colour to purple. His thoughts attempted to focus on any wildlife nearby - but all he could focus on were ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: The Mirror's Curse (full!)
The wizard's brown eyes glare at the adventurers, his robes black and his expression vacant. His eyes wander towards the dragon... his expression changes to a snarl, as he disapparates ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Quidditch for first years
this was well thought out but i found some spelling mistakes "occordingly" is supposed to be spelled "accordingly". i was confused as too who left with Filch. you said the ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Quidditch for first years
Okay, let's have a look of what you have said: Hey W0lfbane, let's have a look at this (very!) short story! A story doesn't need to be long to interest ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: In Oculis Draconis DT
I really don't think they are interested Scarlett you've given them over a week nearly two weeks to post... either that or they probably haven't logged in for a while.
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Quidditch for first years
I noticed no-one really commented on this post under the Harry Potter thread, so I figured it would be best posted here since I wanted to know if there were ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Not Forever
Good job although I spotted a grammar mistake: I won't love you forever. I'd rather love you today, praying to God(.) He (he) allows me to love you tomorrow as ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Windmills of my mind
Awesome! I can just feel the energy radiating from the picture... or is that the wind? There isn't much in this picture but sometimes simplicity is better than a complicated ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: Who Am I?
Probably Luna Lovegood, although it's just too bad she didn't go after anyone. The poem is sort of good, although it's not really much to go on if someone were ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: The Mirror's Curse (full!)
If it will make the story easier to carry on I'm fine with you doing that.
Aug 16, 2011
