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"A sister?" I asked in shock, dropping the guard's shirt. He nodded. "Meredith?" I asked again. He nodded again. I took a step back, shocked. This could help the resistance! ...

Name: (Both names.) Everlee (Lee for short) Pond Gender: Female Age: 17 Doll or Rogue: Rogue Appearance: (Words and/or picture. Anime pictures are accepted) Everlee is smaller and thinner then ...

In the land of Aria, there are special people, called “rogues,” with mystic powers. These powers are connected to their swords which they call “pets.” The pets only connect with ...

That was amazing word choice! Sometimes i had problems understandin what you were trying to say, but I am not very good at vocabulary. :D Really good! I enjoyed it, ...

Really good poem! I agree with the previous comment, but other than those points, I thought it was amazing! And so true. I was impressed of how smoothly everything flowed. ...

I ran to the prison cell... late. I hoped Jasmine hadn't been waiting too long. I hadn't meant to, but after the battle, I had been so tired. I had ...

Good story! I didn't quite get how he knew too much, but I tend to be slow and probably just didn't catch it. :D Just a few suggestions. When you ...

Really good poem! I loved the message it gave. Really, really, great! I didn't seen any grammer errors. And there was only one part of the poem that I felt ...

hehe, I think his lolly pop is a bit big! It's bigger than his head! and how is he supposed to eat it with that mustache of his? hehe, good ...

Really good! It flows smoothly, and I didn't see any grammer errors (other then the previous post). I like the idea and the imagery. The rhyme didn't seem forced, and ...

Ok, mostly I agree with the comment before, but I have a few other suggestions. Well, first of all, suicide is kinda a touchy subject and I think it is ...

I have never thought about humans that way. This is brilliant! Good job! I was expecting something different when I started to read it, but it impressed me! I loved ...

This is great! I love the imagery, especially in the first stanza. It really drew me in and made me want to keep reading. Good job! I didn't see any ...

This is great! I loved how you said that the man who killed him was just a normal man. And I loved the second to last stanza about everything that ...

Good poem! Really sad, but good! I could feel the emotions through the writing, so great job! I liked the style of the poem, it helped with the emotions. I ...