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Everlee I open my eyes to see that the sun is already up in the sky. I must've fallen asleep. I sit up and look over to the farmhouse where ...

Really depressing. But you did a really good job with it! Few points: 1.)I would add an 'it' in there so it makes more sence so it looks like this. ...

Love it Blonde! And I'm going to give Razzle alittle more time before I drag Bee into the story, if that is okay. Tell me if it isn't. Everlee "Maybe ...

Kyle The music sounds and the dancers prepare. I stand in the corner alone as the first measure plays. I watch, envious, as my friend dances away with the man ...

That is a really deep poem. Really sad too. I enjoyed reading. You had great vocabulary. At first, I was confused about what you were actually writing about, but it ...

I love those books! They are my favorite! Good job with all of the characters, I thought they were pretty accurate to the book. And the story was too. I ...

Ah, that's sad, and cute. Good peice, I really connected with the character. My only thought is that it didn't have enough detail The end was the best with that. ...

Wow! I wish I could draw that good! You have excelent detail, I love it! These look like things you would get at the store with the white cardboard picture ...

Falling Skies Wind brushes through my hair. I close my eyes and smile as my wings flap. The sun is rising and I turn to the east without opening my ...

This is really good. My suggestion would be to blend the colors better. Oh, and make all of your pencil marks going the same direction. Unless you wanted it to ...

Wow, you have thought alot about this. Really good! I can imagine listening to it. I guess the only way to make it better would be to add a second ...

Aww... That's such a sweet poem! I love it! One correction: I constantly think back to our middle school times, the moments we spent saying "Hi" and "high-fiving" touched my ...

Love it! That was really good, and I loved how you made it rhyme. I think poems are best when they rhyme. My only question is what exactly this poem ...

Really loved the poem! I love how you describe both fear and excitement. Good descriptions. My only suggestion would be to break up you lines more because it is a ...

Hey Gleek, can we start writing? I'm really excited for this and I want to start