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XD oh man that is too funny! Decepticon? I would have never guessed. Brilliant work, really.

Woooooooow! Might I suggest footnotes for the big words for those who are dumb like me and have no idea what they mean? ;) other than that, bravo. Well dpne

This poem is intentionally chopped and broken. Just an attempt to explain how Im feeling thanks. You tell me the poem Is beautiful. You say the images Are so vivid. ...

Gotta write this quick, sorry for bluntnes. The chest is alittle low altogether, love the nose. It fits. Wheres the headband? Great dress, but she looks like she's about to ...

Sadness. Awe!

Pull back our sleeves. Not selves. Thats the only mistake. This poem rocks my socks!

W. O. W.

Imagine a world where songs are all cherished. Dream of a place where poet's hearts won't perish. In our souls the words will be eternally etched, Like whispers and sighs ...

Aweeee! :/ *sniffle* I wish my life in love ended that well.

Thats what i try to do. I write a paragraph about writers block, how i feel, and yow i can overcome it. But this poem is much better than anything ...

I like how you werent afraid to ask questions that you migh have never asked. Bcausr who really knows? Ive come VERY close to suicide, and I can tell you ...

In this time, our dependance Comes from technological things. In our eyes, comfort is found In the whirring of machines. Stalkers and creepers, hiding in the pixels Use this said ...

Hehehe, you did it again. You used warm twice in the first stanza. This one is actually better than chapter 2. Hmmmm. Try putting "its a tornado" in quotes. Or ...

-_- woulda flowed better without rhyme. Too much restriction. But that's the price I pay for pairing up with someone. Dont get be wrong, B is an uh may zing ...

The title makes it sound creepy. But man is this good! Nitpicks: "Glistens" should be glisten. Or make "skins" skin. The second verse uses "our" too much. I know its ...