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^^^ Ditto Daisy about the needle. I like the concept. Its quite original, and keeps this from being average. The line 'And did something very rare' seems really forced. Maybe ...

One question: who is Nessy? One statement: generally when a piece requires an explanation at the bottom, there's something missing from the actual writing. One comment: having the line "Time ...

ok now i just wrote this after i told one of my friends why they shouldn't cut themselves. here goes: Her sadness echoed into the bitter night air This was ...

The moment you were hurt, the warmth Was gone With your song. Soon the chills of bitterness Come creeping Quietly keeping The rhythm of your pain. To escape You must ...

We all make mistakes That's what makes us human, And we don't always win, So don't use that pin. There's always the storm before the calm. Remember that. :chorus: What ...

I'll admit it Your beautiful eyes Had me hooked from the start. And I'll admit it. You've still got a little Piece of my heart, oh yeah I don't know ...

Thanks guys! I really appreciate your comments I am really sorry if i sounded rude it's just that I'm not always in the best of a mood especially this year ...

As i lay awake at night, I think about the day that just went by, Wondering if I could have changed anything to make it better. - you need another ...

As i lay awake at night, I think about the day that just went by, Wondering if I could have changed anything to make it better. I think about my ...

This was basically meant to be short and to the point.

well I'm sorry but if you had read the whole thing then you would have realized that it wasn't really a poem i just thought that that was the closest ...

[quote="zelithon"]I am not tying to start a fight. By normal I meant typical kidds who do not care about books, art or writing anyway. Most kidds I know dont. Chinese ...

uh i think you mean ANIME!! first of all lol and im afraid it does need talent go to a topic by melodie called anime and click on a link ...

lol it sounds like it's suppose to be in a fairy tale book...if thats what you were looking for its pretty good....but if you were looking for sumthing else....YOU FAIL ...

can be so nice at first then turn out so bitter....hey it is like dark chocolate!!!