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Re: Bloody Apple
Emily: Oiii, I told you you didn't have to read it again. Hehe. Thanks though. And I probably would've continued it before...but I kinda lost interest in HP stuff... Miked: ...
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: Good Will
Heidigirl: Thanks for stopping by! :D Glad to hear you liked it. And thanks for the nit-picky stuff. Pickle: Of course, I think it was fairly sick, the way you ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Wounded
Hey! This is a bit of a quick review, as I haven't got a whole lot of time right now, but I wanted to stop by. I *really* liked it. ...
Mar 18, 2008 -
Re: Bloody Apple
Disclaimer: Obviously I hold no claim to these characters. JK owns all. And I've posted this a couple other places (HPANA etc) so if it looks familiar don't freak out! ...
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: Circus Pirates 2
Hello again! A bit of grammar stuff first: It didn’t look quite appetizing, but it smelled all right. ....smelled alright . Angie watched me eat for a little while. I ...
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: Circus Pirates 1
Pirates. Uhmmm, yummmy
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: Fairytales
LoveableLittleSock: Haha that's alright. Thanks for pointing them out. I guess I do add a bunch of extras sometimes. Hehe. :roll: Thank youuu.
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: Chance of Snow 1
I'm reviewing as I read so... : It took me two years to become a postman. To pass the test I had to carry a seventy pound bag of mail ...
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: Honest opinion needed.
The other critiques mostly covered what I wanted to say. *But* I don't think you should scratch this idea. If you do want to continue it you should think about ...
Mar 17, 2008 -
Re: Pianissimo
Okay, so first of all, I loved it. It was a sort of romantic idea, (The piano, the time period) but you pulled it off very well. I enjoyed it ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Good Will
Wow KJ, thanks! I kind of wish I had posted this on here before I had turned it in so get some of those little tense details and things sorted ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Good Will
So, in my English class this year, we had to choose a human rights topic and do a bunch of projects and reports on them. For the final my teacher ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Why?
I really, really liked this. It took the first couple paragraphs for me to get what it was about, but I think I like it that way, it was a ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Cinnamon
Very, very cool idea. I have to ask, have you ever seen the movie Chocolat ? Because this, especially the beginning paragraphs, reminded me of it very much. Anyways, talking ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: The Monster
I enjoyed this alot myself. And at first I agreed with the others, because of how sophisticated the language was, but then I came to like it the way it ...
Mar 11, 2008
