VivelaMusique

Hey Julia, I'm not going to do any intense line-by-line reviewing, because I honestly have no clue what I'm doing as far as poetry. But, I will say that I ...

I wrote this awhile ago, but just remembered it. Figured I post it anyways. Lyrics are Louis Armstrong's. Jack and Will are Disney's. I see trees of green, red roses ...

For french accents: Long I sound: Fish becomes "feesh" "Th" sounds become "z" sounds. For example, This sounds like zis, or dzis. Long E sound: After becomes "aftaaair". R sound: ...

1. How do you care for your instruments (such as cleaning, storing, and fixing... whichever you feel like answering)? Yourself? (This is more important. Do the little cuts change performance? ...

I, myself, don't know a whole lot about piracy, but I tried writing a story including them once, and it, for lack of other words, epic failed. Know why? Because ...

Hey, Obviously I've heard this piece before (Duhh), but I've never actually read it. Hmm. So, here we go... Needless to say, we are a strange species. Just wondering, is ...

Hello, I review as I read, so I'm sorry if I critique anything that you remedy later on. :) The cooling wind swings briefly in the humid, July air. As ...

Hello Amyrose! Welcome to YWS! One thing I'm not sure you know is that we like to keep a 2:1 ratio between reviews and posts. So before you post something ...

Hello again! This has definitely gotten better! But there's still somethings to fix... “The Police believe John Aston was killed by one of his ex-employees. The layoff Aston Automobiles just ...

*Is getting hungry* :D

JHall, Oooh, hahaha. I guess that's probably why I didn't understand it... :) I enjoyed reading your stuff. I keep an eye out for anything new you post. -Maggie

Hey again! I found a couple little issues in the revisions. He wasn't going anywhere in particular, he just decided to go for a walk out of boredom. This seems ...

Carly, I've finished with all of yours. :)

Hello, One last lyric. :) Hypocrisy Lying, betraying Idiocy Okay, interesting lead in...:) Say something smart If your so smart Repetition of "smart" gets a little irksome. If you’re so ...

Hello! Anothah review for ya as asked. :) Did you see me cry…. When you left I died… This is the tiniest bit melodramatic... You made a choice It wasn’t ...