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Re: Bus Stop
Hello, This is likely going to be quick and painless, but if it's not I apologize in advance. I read through this first quickly and didn't notice anything major that ...
Sep 4, 2009 -
Re: College Essays
When I look at my dad I see several things. I see a middle aged man with wrinkling skin, a business man with too much on his mind, and father ...
Sep 2, 2009 -
Re: Bloody Apple
Thanks guys. I completely forgot this existed, it was posted almost two years ago I think. Wow. Thanks for the comments anyways. -Maggie
Aug 17, 2009 -
Re: A Splendid Agony
Hey Jimmy, So, like I already mentioned, my poetry editing skills are about as good as my poetry writing skills. That is to say, not good. :) So, I'm not ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: String Cheese
*Huggles* Hello, soul-sister! ;) I'm a fellow cheese-stick addict. And lovin' it. Other than the above mentioned, minor things I can't find anything to change. It's completely perfect! ;) Seriously, ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Deception by the Viledee
Hey Iain, Maggie here to do your review! I hope I'm helpful for you! Nit-picks: The dark was deep as black satin Deep as satin? *scratches head* This description doesn't ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Fish. (Poisson d'Avril...)
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: The Story of an Elevator
Hey Caitlin! I'll be your reviewer this afternoon! :) Now, for the piece... The day was kind of blah for me. Just an ordinary field trip, nothing special. Never mind, ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
9/10 Very pretty! I love the flower becoming a skirt.
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Soma
Wow, this is fantastic! I really like it. The only thing I thought looked a little strange was the eyelashes...they're in little spike/clumps. That might've been intentional (some people are ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: The Sickness
Today, after a Harry Potter filled night of intrigue and adventure, once again I find I have the sickness . Sometimes known as "Boredom". After a mere four hours of ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
Haha, Dorothy, awesome. :) 8.5/10 Username: Care to explain?
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Another Reviewer :)
Er, another bump? Nobody's interested...? C'mon, I know you're out there!
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read
I would put the Twilight books on here (especially 2, 3 and 4) but I figured that would be a give in. ;) Anyway: 5. The Finishing School - Gail ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: closed for editing
Hello, I'm Maggie! It's nice to meet you! It looks like you're new to the site, so I'll just point out that in general the mods like us to keep ...
Jul 15, 2009
