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  • Other Poetry Re: Irene

    Hi again Noelle! I live on the east coast as well! Nice to know I'm not alone. :D About your poem: the thunderous devestation as it traveled farther. devastation Despite ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A necklace

    The chain broke. My silver heart flew across the room, and my red one flew into my chest. Chink-chink, bum-bum. And we stared at each other. Belts undone, lips red, ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: What We Left Behind

    Hi Noelle! I haven't been on the site in a long time, but I saw you did a lot of reviews recently so I figured I'd attempt to review one ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Neither docile nor timid thou art

    Thanks for the review! Out of curiosity did you mark those words because they're big? Or because of how they were used?

    Aug 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sorry

    Lauren, Hello! Hope this is helpful: A couple things I noticed: First of all you missed a couple spelling errors which, while minor, were kind of distracting. I terrible friend. ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Neither docile nor timid thou art

    This is a free verse, very self-indulgent poem. Forgive me. Any thoughts about it? Neither docile nor timid thou art. Yet with your veritable tenacity you prevail upon my consciousness; ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Old Stuff

    I've uploaded a couple other photos that I've taken recently. :) These first two are from my backyard. And these two are from just after a thunder and lightening storm. ...

    Jul 26, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The difference of wings

    Pink, First of all, I very much love the quote in your signature. Second, my first impression of this was very positive. I really like the idea of the angel/dragon ...

    Jul 26, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Old Stuff

    Thank you all :)

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Old Stuff

    Periablo: Thank you! Calligraphy: Thanks! For my editing I used photobucket...nothing fancy. Since you're interested here's the original of the flower You're right about the flower being out of focus.

    Jun 15, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Old Stuff

    So it's been awhile since I've been on here, but I have a couple sketches I've done in the past year or so...Nothing super special. I call him The Grump. ...

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Alice

    The new Alice in Wonderland was great! Did you see it? Anyway, I love your Alice! While we can't see all of her hands the suggestion of them is well ...

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Cheetah sketch

    I like this very much! I can't see much to comment upon except that the chest of the adult seems to go out at an angle. I can't tell if ...

    Jun 13, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Fanleaf

    Snoink: Thanks for reading! But to reply to your comments: 1. I capitalized the last word of every line because I was trying to have the last word work as ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Fanleaf

    A disease of grapevines: soiled, spoiled Rotten, Rotted garden: green waxed Brown Muddy earth: weeds grow Anyway Have you heard of: Fanleaf: decayed Vines Climb damn near anything: fences, walls ...

    Nov 24, 2009


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