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Re: Safe (Part 2)
Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...
Sat Aug 06, 2011 12:26 pm -
Re: Pudding
Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...
Sat Aug 06, 2011 12:26 pm -
Re: Dying Love Chapter 3
Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...
Sat Aug 06, 2011 12:25 pm -
Re: creeping frost
Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...
Sat Aug 06, 2011 12:22 pm -
Re: The Power of the Crystal
Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...
Sat Aug 06, 2011 12:22 pm -
Re: I Hate Him *18*
Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...
Sat Aug 06, 2011 12:13 pm -
Re: Super Sapien: The Arise Of The Winship Underground Community
Are you going to add more or is that a small excerpt from the story? It's hard to properly analyse your writing style or the story itself, when it seems ...
Thu Feb 12, 2009 5:55 am -
Re: Death and All His Friends Pt. 1
Numerous punctual errors, except your weariness acts as a get-outta-jail-free card I wanted to know what was going on in the story - thats not a bad thing for the ...
Mon Feb 09, 2009 9:18 am
