Vitaletum

Name: Herbert Age: 87 Appearance: Creepy, aged, spurs uneasiness Background: Supermarket clerk, retired Personality: Reserved, perverse Strengths: Persuasion Weaknesses: Modern technology

Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...

Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...

Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...

Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...

Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...

Not enough dragons. I must say, if there were more dragons the narrative would flow like a river, but rivers are awesome - it really depends how happy you are ...

Are you going to add more or is that a small excerpt from the story? It's hard to properly analyse your writing style or the story itself, when it seems ...

Numerous punctual errors, except your weariness acts as a get-outta-jail-free card I wanted to know what was going on in the story - thats not a bad thing for the ...