VioletJune

I love the bird/alligator! Hahaha it's really funny

Oh Katie darling :) lord knows I've been reading your stories FOREVER and you are definitely improving. *throws confetti into air* Yeah, quiet a few typos but we can't win ...

Depression is a strange state of emotion. It’s all consuming, controlling, devastating. It hides under sheets and in between floor board cracks. In places so bright no one would guess ...

Thanks for your input I really, really appreciate it :) I'll try putting it up in dramatic poetry and see what I get there lol.

Well, first off that whole beging part ruins the story, now one wants to have everything in the story be set before them, it ruins the surprise. And everytime there's ...

So I really had no idea where to post this, if you have any ideas I would appreciate your input :) Depression is a strange state of emotion. It’s all ...

Wow. I really most certainly enjoyed this lol. It flowed very smoothly and I totally didn't expect him to be the killer! Love love love it haha- Vi :)

I liked the idea of this story but I would like it MUCH more if you toned down on the big huge descriptive words, I mean I'm all for dabbling ...

Thanks for editing, and very nice job with your pictures :)

So I read all these stories at like two last night and was way to exhausted to leave a comment but I just wanted to let you know they're great! ...

I really liked the idea of this story, it made me laugh. Everyone else pointed out most of your mistakes so I'll just say it needs more development haha, hope ...

Um, wow. This is fantastic in my opinion, you're writing style is super original and totally kept me interested. The subject, the main character, the plot- totally had me pulled ...

Did no one else notice that bulidings is spelled wrong? (Sigh)

This story seems a little awkward, I like the idea but the way some sentences fit together was just confusing and random. Hope you keep trying and good luck :)

Wow! Thanks :) and no this wasn't a personal experience, I was just thinking of it haha.