VioletJune

So here's a pic I took of my friend Juliana that I really enjoy, I hope you like it too :)

I have to say that this may possibly be my favorite poem of all time on YWS like honestly, I personally loved the way you delivered the story and the ...

I thought this poem had a really nice theme, everything rolled together pretty smoothly and your descriptions were very good, I only had a few things I didn't like, including ...

Wow, I really, realy, REALLY liked this. Totally captured the mood of the situation and portrayed it in an interesting light. Nice job!

I liked this because it was very true, your wording skills are great and I hope you post more :)

Wow, this is really good! Bravo! :)

OK so I posted this a long time ago and am re-posting it because no one ever goes back that far so I know some people haven't read this, and ...

Well everyone else can disregard my last comment seeing as she fixed everything lol

Ok, so I liked this a lot :) at some points I kinda though, well this seems a little cheesy, but I had to remind myself that it is fantasy ...

I really wish this had been about a little child. . . . I really don't like stories about animal love, I mean don't get me wrong I love animals ...

Aww that's like my favorite line! Haha but I totally get your point. . . It does change the tone. . . Oh well though. And no we haven't officially ...

The only thing I have to say is that you need to CAPITALIZE YOUR I'S! Gah that was very annoying to me haha, other than that I (

Ok! Well I guess I'll be the first to comment :) It's very short, but i think that adds to the point. The only think I would suggest is changing ...

Definitely enjoyed this :) it portrayed a very captivating story and was easy to follow. The only type of reviewing I might suggest would be the coma usage but hey, ...

I liked this, pretty short and sweet and to the point. I found it quiet relatable and liked the way it flowed.