VintageGalaxy

Okay, I just figured out that image you sent, and oh my, this is the most helpful thing I have ever seen. You have no idea. Thank you!

I have been so excited for this! Love it so much. This is probably my favorite story I have read on here. Anyway, review time. 1. "...and run my hands ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, about Maris's eyes. Kyri has the ability to look into people's eyes and know how they feel. But she can't seem to read Maris's eyes ...

Thank you for all the grammar critique. I don't worry too much about my grammar cause it's terrible, but it's always nice to have a review focusing on it! Also, ...

Thank you for the review! About the italics-I write this story on my blog (because of some highlight issues) and when I copy and paste it here it automatically italicizes ...

Thanks for the review. I know my dialogue punctuation is horrible, but thank you for pointing it out. I will try to remember that for the next chapters. Thanks again! ...

You didn't seem harsh at all. Also, my language arts teacher used to tell me that all the time but I guess I forgot. Thanks for the reminder and the ...

Thanks for the review. This is actually very helpful. I really underestimate how bad my grammer really is, so I'm actually kind of glad you pointed it all out. Thanks ...

Thanks! I'll definitely use that.

Thank you for the review! The first thing I want to say is, those quote thingies are so cool! Also, I apologize for being a bit vague. I re-read what ...

Glad the review helped!

Sorry I was kinda vague, but my reviews are absolutely the worst. I can't wait to see the next draft, and again, great job!

Oh, that makes a lot more sense. Sorry for the confusion!

Thank you fo the review! Glad that you enjoyed. Honestly, I struggle with descriptions all the time. And my grammar is terrible. Thank you again!

Thanks for the review! I do have a lot of issues regarding tenses, I'll definitely keep that in mind. I agree with basically everything you said(I am terrible at actually ...