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Re: Among Dying Stars: Chapter 1
Hi, VintageGalaxy here for a review. I was blown away by this. I was expecting this to be good, but I feel like this could have been a book I ...
Jun 8, 2017 -
Re: It Could've Been Me: Ch3 (draft 2 version)
I have been so excited for this! Love it so much. This is probably my favorite story I have read on here. Anyway, review time. 1. "...and run my hands ...
Mar 2, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 1.2
Hi there! Love your story so far. Alright, I'll try. 1. So I noticed a few typos in here. For example, "The seniors were obviously far more interested in the ...
Mar 2, 2017 -
Re: Prologue
This is really amazingly well written. Really. And your grammar is impeccable. Might I just say I love this story sooooooooooooo much! I am quite confused, though. I don't really ...
Feb 22, 2017 -
Re: Chapter One
I love this story. Also I don't mind the parenthesies. I use them a lot too. I would also like to point out that this is way better than anything ...
Feb 22, 2017 -
Re: It Could've Been Me: Ch1 and Ch2 (draft 2 version)
I love this so much! The concept is just so intriguing and I love your writing style. Anyway, I'll start with chapter one. I love it. It's so creative! I ...
Feb 22, 2017