Vincent

great discription in the story. but its realllyyyyy long. try posting in sections vince

an amazing story! i couldnt stop reading. i could actually imagine myself being in the middle of a blazing stadium full of dead and dying, in the chase between a ...

Great story, i enjoyed reading it. one thing though: He bent down and threw a couple of logs into the fire and looked to the outside where the snow lightly ...

i enjoyed this story. there were a few errors like "busses" and stuff, and some of the sentences dont run smoothly. try reading through it yourself, it helps. overall, great ...

yeah, sorry about the spacing, i totally forgot. that "the soldier" was a mistake, i probably missed it. i made Nunzio seem proud and arrogant at first to give the ...

the most amazing poem ive ever read in my entire live! brilliant! fantastic! great! monafique! picture perfect! keep it up! vince

this is the second part of my first chapter. sorry but i didnt have time to improve this one, and itl probably have just as much mistakes as the first. ...

that poem is amazing! great job! i really enjoyed it. keep up the good work! :D

this is the new and improved version. im still working on the info-dumping, but sorted out those other little things. please tell me if i missed something. thanks for everything! ...

this is going to help more than alot! thanks. ill sen the "updated" version as soon as i can. sorry about all these mistakes, but yeah. lots of thanksses (or ...

I enjoyed the story and i think you can really make this turn into a hit. the only problem is that you tend to make little mistakes, like, "She always ...

Hi Someguy!!! welkome! im new too! jay for the new people! :D

thanks for the tips and everything! its going to do wonders for eon! thanks.

Hi Kyte, Thank you for your comment, I do appreciate it, please just take note English is not my first language, I am Afrikaans speaking but have English as second ...

go on google search and "name meaning" ussually ottl be baby name sites, but then search for names that can be used as surnames and meanings that go hand in ...