Vincent

Ive come to do two things 1) apologize because i just posted a poem with the same title (without the happy ending) but i didnt see this and im really ...

this was a great part and i love war poems! there a bits and pieces of sentences were you tottally cut of the flow And while those battles Are fought ...

this was creepily enjoyable (if thats a word) i liked it but someplaces rime and some dont, and has no solid structure, but hey, im no poet and not sure ...

this is a great poem. so if youd excuse me, im going to make my time count. (dang, i only read live changing poems today) keep it up vince

nice, i really liked this too. i dont have a big sister instead i have the oppisite: a little brother but this makes me think of how i act. its ...

ok.... you scare me too :D just joking vince 8)

little short but i enjoyed it. couldnt find any problems vince

There are monsters under my bed: There are monsters under my bed With their evil eyes gleaming red They have blood stained teeth Designed to rip me limb from limb ...

i enjoyed this a lot and cant wait to find out what happens next. The two colossal spires showed above the canopy of trees. They were the symbol and the ...

this is an amazing story and i cant wait to read more! just watch out for repeating words like wolf and stuff. heading in the direction of the clearing where ...

cool. ironic and funny keep up the good work! vince

whoa... that was awesome. i love the idea and where this story is going. you describe the character well, byt not the enviroment. its like characters walking around in darkness ...

this sounds amazing and ill read it! you just have to work on discription more, because when you said "killing everyone in their path" doesnt give us much info, we ...

just something i started working on. tear it appart if you have to. i didnt go over it alot. Artorius Dameon, son of Ambrose and descendant of General Barthio Dameon, ...

so...sacared....disturbed...both....*sucks thumb* so, is this...one of those badluck things? *looks around nervously* but nice now, if youll excuse me, i have to run for my live *runs away screaming*