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I liked the use of words. The first two paragraphs, especially the first, lack adjectives; somehow the sentences do not seem to flow but rather feel tagged on to each ...

I enjoy fantasy novels directed towards young adults and kids. The Lost Years of Merlin was a gem that I found at a local library. The book is very well ...

So many days, so many nights have come and gone And all alone, again, I sit before a fire. My soul is burning with desire, My mind sinking in deep ...

I really enjoyed the story. The way you painted the images with words is beautiful. My only suggestion would be to change the last sentences. You see, Cassidy had pushed ...

I liked the central idea of the story. I do agree with the review above that the first half of the story was more engaging. The reason for this, I ...

I am a fool to doubt my feelings, To pray and hope for what can’t be. Upon the dark and stormy evening I saw you once and ever since My ...

I lost myself, I do not recognize the stranger in the mirror. The dull and lifeless face that stares at me Speaks softly, “You’re just a puppet, not the puppeteer.” ...